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4/10. Art is pretty, dropped 20 chaps in cuz MC is immediately good at everything and has women thrown at him.
Makes no sense that orig body healing + fighting carries over and new body can keep up in a few days. Also he shouldn't know anything about politics/managing fam cuz he was fighting 10yrs straight from young. Hate how former engaged lady written: no human being falls in love just cuz the guy is no confident. Progression way to ez, Pendragon no struggles just super battle god
2/10 I just fcking hate the MC. He's an asshole trying to be badass. I understand the hate from being betrayed/used by everyone but why is he always a dick. I also think this one he gets everything too ez. Setting was interesting, but MC ruins it.
2/10 art is good but MC actually braindead. Why does he spend so much time talking instead of accomplishing his goals. 80% of the time he didn't need to die and go back if he just used his brain for a SECOND
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