beta
There was no chemistry whatsoever and I have no idea how or why anything was happening
2/10
So cliche. You can tell it was written by a young person, and it was probably their first time writing a story so the plot is thin and cringey
3/10 (?)
ISTG they were trying to be cringey on purpose this HAS to be written by a literal child. Even worse than a thin plot, THERE IS NONE AT ALL. It is quite literally just a fine string of hair that calls itself a plot. Dumb and unrealistic and embracing. You can’t even turn your brain off for it because it melts your brain and the constant pain of that reminds you how bad it is
-1000/10
oH nO im fAt! Has a training arc spanning all of 5 panels and is now skinny and ready to embrace the Korean beauty standards. Dumb and unrealistic
cliche child care whatnot. Dumb brain rot and everyone is just so unrealistic
3/10
Sheesh. I got quite far into it before I started to realise that it’s dumb how her family now adores he so much their flexing their power on everyone for her, it just feels like it’s so the author can insert themselves mentally (y/n style). All of a sudden they’re thick as thieves, the villains were thrown out quickly and the interesting and angst family dynamic has disappeared
6/10
No chemistry. Everyone is dumb. All the characters should just die. It’s hard to read things when you don’t give a shit about any of the character lmao
It did have an interesting concept tho ugh what a waste
1/10 (because I didn’t get make it past like the 2nd chap)
AFGNXGBJWEF QUASTOR YOU LITTLE SHIT YOU RUINED IT. TLDR Quastor is a bitch who is manipulative and coerces yumi, aside from that I was interested in the story so I’m so sad that the ML is a douchebag
4/10 stars (for the good start)
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