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89 chapters 2/5
The facing was off. The whole climax-falling action kinda thing is a mess. Its like everything was forcefully pushed together- maybe in attempt to give some impact but all that build up for nothing/rushed and lacking end. Disappointing cause the premise was so nice, the characters are interesting, and girly is a good fighter- I was looking forward to her growing up and all the action. I was severely let down.

84 ch. 8/10
That was a ride. The hubby is precious! and she did protect him. Girly was clumsy and got distracted, tho it did give some "I called it!" satisfaction. The characters are adorable and the story would be perfect/well-rounded if her friend's wedding are shown- They did play a major role to her success -and that perspective will add depth and aweee-feeling.