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Writing wise this is fucking great. The parallels, the endless loop of struggle, the tiny little detail placed everywhere. It’s the kind of story I’d analyse for an English essay. But 2 things: 1. I’ve read the whole thing and still have no clue how to pronounce Llewellyn. 2. I don’t think whatever was happening with shavonne made any sense? I thought he had some crazy mental illnesses/was a test subject of some kind but no he just had his memory erased once? Then what was up with the insomnia?
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