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4/5
This was better than what i thought (the rating made it look bad), plus the art is pretty good too. I enjoyed the story and especially love the ending. Romance is ok ok (didn't gave me butterflies), I read it for plot. I love the side stories with other couple and how everyone got happy ending (Except for Queen, She doesn't deserve it. JUSTICE FOR LOUIS!!!).
READ THE NOVEL FOR BETTER ENDING
It break my heart to see such kind of rushed ending. This was such a good story and it has so many potential but from 2nd half the story pacing got faster and then the rushed ending just like that. The last fight, I don't even know wtf happened. It ended in just 1 chapter. This is so heart breaking.
Still gave it a 4 star because it was good.
The story is fine. FL is beautiful and cool while ML is Handsome and Badass. This is the kind of story i like (with both strong FL and ML) except that there are psychos everywhere and Every Fucking psycho are being obsessed over FL and this being repeated is kind of getting annoying now.
But i am happy that FL can shine
4/5 (for now)
Another Child MC story with many plotholes but i am still enjoying reading this because of Family bonding...... father and daughter. It's cute.
4/5 (for now)
The starting is good and Interesting. I love ML in his Slime era.... so funny and cute. Overall it's Cute and sweet but also kinda Bland and cliche.
Also, The art is so Beautiful. The girls are so pretty, be it FL, OG FL or ML's Sister, so damn gorgeous.
4/5 (For Now)
So far, nice..... i guess.
It was Interesting at first but now idk ..... it's ok to read i guess. Maybe i had more expectations from a grown up mind but inside a child body. She has the power, she has the resources but yet she's delaying lot of important things which she can do now. Also her cuteness, sometimes it just comes of so forced and unnatural. Still i am reading this to see how the future event will unfold and for Handsome Daddy and ofcourse for all the beauties
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