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It’s not bad it’s just too straightforward. There is absolutely no growth of the mc. She gets everything on a silver platter and I don’t find enjoyment in that.
It’s not a bad story and it has an interesting concept, but it was a little boring to me.
It’s taking too long to start a plot point. It’s keeps repeating the same things about her death and I don’t have the patience for it
There’s a lot going on….and I don’t like any of it. How do you fit like 50 tropes in 6 chapters?? No thanks
I was trying to give this a chance but it’s boring. So far there’s no other plot other than she’s a baby and it draaags. I also don’t like how mc is having a pit party over her past life. Sure, be wary of a new family after your past makes sense, but the way she’s acting is ridiculous. You say you hate your father, then get upset when he doesn’t pay attention to you??? What sense does that make??!!?
Definitely not a bad story, I just like having more of a plot than just romance.
Her brother is definitely the ML. Adopted or not that is not my vibe :/
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