Comments & Queries 6

This plot itself isn't bad but what is w/ this absolute garbage storytelling? It jumps around everywhere, shows a TON of backstories we don't need when they could simply tell us, I skip 3/4 of all dialogue or any words written and I still understand everything, and the storytelling is just annoying and doesn't provoke suspense like Ik the author is trying and failing to do. Not a bad story but it really is terrible storytelling. I'll decide if to drop it later.

Awww, this is like a cute feel-good story . . . but super dark. The human mind, gross. Anyways. I love MC, Neju, Ahuku and Tsuki. They're all adorable. Everyone should just leave them alone. Poor cutiepies. Shaping up to be an excellent series. UP: The more I see Kai, the more I hate her. That thing murdered all those innocent animals and the first thing Kai says is "she's not a bad person". Murder doesn't make you bad? Screw you. Clearly, you also don't see those animals lives as important.

If I was ML, I would've long given up on MC who clearly knows how ML feels, but doesn't care how hurt ML is, but rather gives ML the silent treatment cause he expects ML to get over his feelings and find him again when ML decides he want to be friends again. Literally what MC's doing rn. Ik MC's not bad, but it's extremely selfish and self-centred. I can't picture someone who doesn't care how hurt ML feels to ever truly love ML. SN: ML kissing MC repeatedly in his sleep is creepy. Tl is bad.

Everyone in this fam is psycho. A few months old baby is gathering food for herself, escaping rooms and navigating herself fine in a huge mansion, can go up and down stairs, can perfectly understand what everyone is saying, can use magic, can save herself from extreme dangers and NO ONE THINKS THIS IS ABNORMAL. They wouldn't have been able to do these things as children SO WHY THE HELL ARE THEY ACTING AS IF SHE'S >10y/o?! Their brains need help. How can you leave a baby to fend for herself?!?

Wow, Emperor's such a disgusting fly. I really hope our lovely MC doesn't end up w/ him but can swat him in his place. UP: Wow, MC said that her 1st kiss was only JUST stolen w/o consent by the Emperor, which 1, is him disgustingly oppressing her+controlling her as property and 2, means he didn't kiss her once when having sex. Slime. I want someone to crack his skull open violently but I also want him to scream a lot when he's murdered. I can't decide but he MUST die. Leon+Asensio+CB are cuties.

The first 20 chaps were nice, but now I seriously hate MC. I want them all to die. MC doesn't deserve ML, ML's best friend creeps me out for simply liking ML's older bro, and ML's older bro and father deserve life worse than death. I can't believe MC would believe lies from ML's older bro when he KNOWS they hate each other. He believes the rumours and CHOSE ML's older bro. MC doesn't deserve to even SAY he likes ML, cause you didn't even clarify rumours w/ ML/care how ML's been hurt by his fam.

It gives me an all over the place kinda feeling. It's confusing and lacking in compelling storytelling. Idc who's who, Idc what's going on, and Idc why.