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Ahaha, wow, more pain. Did I really come here expecting fluff? Man, I'm wild stupid fr. *sniffles quietly in resignation* What happened to the people from the other timeline then? I'm heartbroken to think their left behind. Did MC in that timeline really die? Who is Mr. Wolfy Joker? Is it MC's dad, and if so, what's he tryna do messing w/ his son's love life? Has MC messing around w/ time created more deviations and timelines?
I was really supposed to go to sleep early to day, but AHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHA, NOOOOOOO, WTHHHHHH. This so hilarious, I cannot deal. PAHAHAHAHAHAH. *wheezing on the floor like a dying animal* You go, interstellar marshall. Save your wife from the enemy spies. *trembling w/ laughter all day long* Man, ML need to sue these people hard. Not only all his dirt getting dug up, but his reading list is being exposed and it's mortifying. Pfft, CEO be reading all these cringey tropes and RP'ing.
The writing sometimes . . wow. I've overlooked it before but it is getting worse. So cheesy, it's borderline just bad writing. It just leaves me speechless. Idk how to react anymore, but I'm still reading. UP: It never gets better. Hate MC(incompetent trash w/ plot armor), hate all women in this, hate the max level chuuni cringe fest this is, hate the poor writing, hate the stupid plot, hate that I wasted sm time on this garbage. Rme (for the 1000th time).
"I was just congratulating my unchanging and continuous life." Authorrrrr, pahahahaha, oh nooooo. When the author's note just as wild as the story. Pfftt. Love it.
Still confused why this isn't GL, but hellooooo, Ms. Martina. Very nice meeting you this evening, wow.
Yeah, as someone else pointed out, this is stupid. Unnecessarily so when it had the potential to be much better. 1st thing was selectively not detecting the poison or lies when clearly the system tells her these things blatantly. It doesn't make sense the system functions sometimes, but not all the time. All the conflict is very forced and convoluted and the plot holes are GLARING. She got caught sm, why she still there? I overlooked it but it's too much now, so nope. It's ridiculous.
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