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@21
It just seems poorly done. If I have to read comments to understand the story, that's terrible storytelling. The only reason it's not in DNF is cause the story as presented in the comments is cohesive and interesting, and also, Idk if the shortfalls of this story are due to bad storytelling or pacing on part of the author, or if it's missing pages or mistranslations on part of the tl/uploader. In any case, it doesn't seem like BL. It def feels like tragedy and horror. BE is only plausible.
@166
It really started off great. It was quite entertaining, I liked the fights, I liked the concepts, I liked the char's. However, these latest chaps, the tl's are terrible and it seems the author is now pretty directionless, so it's kinda boring, unappealing and really throws off people who were invested in it. Idk yet if this review is solid, so I won't put it in DNF for now.
@47
Simply stopped cause of the tl's. The story is fire so far.
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