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Ngl I hope it is not to much like the other ones with a preg mc that goes away
the suspiciousness is tiring
idk but it seems wrong to me if "Fei" ends up being the ML because some people know he is like really old and everyone thinks Liel is a child and the fact that he keeps trying to get closer to her is also questionable
Lithia's feelings are justified the way she doesn't know how to express them makes sense. The way she did what she did wasn't good. Catherine didn't seem to actually try as well. Unless you can see Lithia's pov she's a villain. But think about how she felt and how her sister was treated and how much happier her sister seemed to her and that despite that Catherina said she would convince her father it seems to Lithia as if she didn't and she just kept saying that.
this seems pretty nice so far :]
this seems nice to read but I'm thinking about how the first chapter she looks like she doesn't particularly like him but the chapters now she does
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