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Good character transition since it’s a soul swap and good plot development.
good overall; specifically- he had the chance to save some pf the people if he just wasn’t so reckless, but he only survived after everyone was killed
It was really good at first, BUT it became a panel with him and 2 or 3 women after that. Seriously man-like behavior to surround him with lots of women on the side; hate it, indecisiveness: HAREM-like.
It was really good BUT THEN came female characters with indications that they have feelings for the ML. So, as another cliche, the author decided to be vague about his feelings even when he almost kissed one. Seriously? Can’t you just either focus on martial arts or be clear with 1 FL?? Is it too much to ask not to taint a very good plot with your version of “romance”?
She’s being used/trapped by the crown prince and she can’t even realize it despite everything she’s been through? And she turned off her sensitivity skill because she feels nobody’s a threat to her? OH MY FREAKING GOSH. Please stay away from being the typical female lead in shoujo—given powers, but became clueless and stupid
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