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The pacing in this story is horrible. The FL is actually stupid? Like no joke she’s dumb asf. The plot probably had potential but it feels so rushed like everything happened WAAYYY to quickly and I couldn’t take it. Overall it’s not good
I really can’t say anything expect for the fact that i got bored. I was actually rlly into this at first, desperate for updates and all but now I just can’t find it in myself to follow this anymore. It’s not bad or anything tho so I might pick it up sometime (yeah I prolly won’t) but I’ve stopped following along ♀
This is so much bullshit. Don’t even bother. FL? Garbage. ML? Garbage. Villan? Hot but still garbage. I’d rather take of a shot of bleach than continue this.
Ok I MIGHT read this sometime if it progresses better but as of right now... the miscommunication is enough to give me a migraine good god. So many unnecessary problems that I don’t have the patience for. Not to mention this story could have been cut short if she just ran off with the child but no...ofc we have to do things the hard way (sense the sarcasm)
No I’m not gonna read.
Dropped.
This is one that I might actually consider picking back up but I’m not even interested anymore. The FL needs to sort out her thoughts and get her shit together and honestly I just can’t be bothered for the time being
Everyone’s annoying as shit. The FL’s naivety is almost disgusting sorry she’s actually intolerable.
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