Read When You Aren’t Sober

Horny dog, literally.

I stick with my one star review. I can understand the struggles of being rushed, but I don’t think that’s an excuse for having a weak plot line to begin with, especially when you stray off your initial path and just keep adding characters upon characters and numerous amounts of conflict. If you know that you’ve slowed down, why keep trying to add everything? Edit and cut out unnecessary fat. Trim your story up. Better luck next time