Comments & Queries 4

I wonder why she never told anyone bout the fire guy. Also, that thing that stole those eyes who called her a demon, please crush him immediately. You shouldn't warn him that you'll chop his head off; do it directly. It stopped at a really bad place.

Could've sworn that I commented on this before, but okay. This was a really nice, soft, creative story. Aesthetic on point. Very sweet, but I would have liked to at least see a bit of their rel or their honesty bout their pasts or just more resolution. I mean it was 50 chaps, but it barely felt like anything. There was talk of resolution, talk of explanation, talk of tying up loose ends, but those things weren't done, so it feels empty. Would've loved to see their rel in school worked out.