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art is good and pretty and the fight scenes are drawn well. mc have chara growth. The chara cast is decent, drawn very nicely. the premise is unique and the plot: mc become stronger, and uncovering the antagonists' scheme and defeating them. the pacing is good and it has lots of action and adversity for the mc. romance is def there...
mc, this middle-aged doctor, is reborn. the majority of the plot is saving patients' lives which allows him to become more famous, a minor plot involving his rival, and overcoming the schemes of antagonists. there's romance as well. mc+fl are likable. the author has done his research on the medical terms and information; I dunno if they're accurate but it sounds legit. i don't think I have what it takes to be a doctor ;-;
he has a dead family...so
the plot: take revenge on the traitors and conspirators. after the first arc past, he gets stronger and the trigger for the next arc is his uncle's disappearance. and along the way, he impresses people with his strength and recruits talents to his side. the art is...interesting; the human physique is not really accurate (e.g huge body, drooping shoulders) anyways the emotional state of the characters is drawn well. I actually like the love interest. She's cool and strong with a likable nature.
mc is kinda hot. revenge is good. the sect leaders are kinda stupid and incompetent tho. it's kinda annoying how he is misunderstood. anyone who realized the truth is killed by the masterminds, that or they won't help the mc (except this one guy whos helping mc just so he can take revenge when he is stronger). the plot: mc has to fight against the system of the pretentious martial arts world. there is romance.
mc clears quests with strategies to supplement his limited strength. mc is smart and quick-witted, able to adapt to unexpected situations. the characters are diverse- players, gods, sentinels, gms, star signs, demons, the system. the female friend, maybe the fl, is super cool and as powerful as mc; perhaps the only hint indicating romance would be the 'share skill' ability mc has, in which the depth of their bond is essential for the degree of utilization.
mc is clever, composed, and likable. his two bodyguards are likable and cool; I love how they're loyal and protective of him. the execution and developments are good, mc is able to overcome difficult ordeals with his smart brain. mc's goal is to inherit his father's company, but I'm not sure the basis. as for the black-haired guy on coverart, he wants to use mc; i wonder how mc will deal with him.
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