| Title | Author | Last reply |
| It kinda lacked the emotional impact....felt ending was... | Kayo | 05-19 05:43 |
| WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!WTF!!!!!!!!!!!! What the... | Person | 07-30 03:40 |
| ...WHAT THE HELL!!!!!! | Ayume | 07-30 03:38 |
| kinda off | purge666 | 06-08 14:11 |
| Humm... aren't there a lot of blanks in this story? | Lady M | 06-08 14:11 |
| I am crying. What happened to that man?How come he just... | Anonymous | 06-08 14:11 |
| mhm @- @ | Opal Sharpir | 08-29 18:51 |
| chptr 5 and next 15..??hmmm.. | SF | 12-25 15:01 |
| I hate the ending but still I like how she instantly ne... | Anonymous | 03-11 08:43 |
| what the hell that's it it was good but hell!! that's a... | lovestruck | 03-02 12:40 |
| It piss me of there no ending!! | Memo | 03-19 00:05 |
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